Suzanna+Leibold+6-B.T.

Roosevelt Student: 6-B.T.


 * Letters of Introduction ( **due 01.21.11 **) **


 * Dear Brody, **


 *  My name is Suzanna, and I am a graduate student at Drake. I’m here to be your writing mentor during this project, and I am very excited to work with you. The course that I’m taking is basically about thinking about writing, how to explain to others about critical writing, questioning the purpose of writing and critically analyzing writing in our society and as a whole. There are different theories that are going to be discussed, as well as figuring out how to put those theories into practice by tweaking them a little. **


 *  My approach to writing is very open but valid. I am very open to your ideas and your writing style. I am aware that there are myriad forms of writing that do not look just like my style of writing. You will never be penalized for writing your own way. I also believe that as long as you can back up an argument with evidence, your argument is good. I know you may have heard that in a few classes and been penalized for it. However, I am 100% serious. If you have the ability to back up an argument, then the argument stands. I’m also a fan of creativity, so feel free to throw out new ideas. By writing about what you are interested in and using your own unique writing style, you bring a sense of your beliefs and yourself into your writing. I am always interested in seeing how people manipulate their writing and like to learn about them a bit more. **


 *  When you solidify your arguments with evidence, try to use sources that agree with you. However, you are welcome to throw in a few sources that have texts that completely contradict your argument, as long as what you’re quoting bolsters your argument. Writing is about creating debate and interesting people in creating an opinion or looking at other sources. Writing is about passing on knowledge. Your ideas are just as valid as any big-named author out there and can be the catalyst that inspires the next big world change. **


 *  I am very excited about this project because I love to write. I have, in fact, written many stories and poems over the years. I am also a fan of Roosevelt High School. I graduated from Roosevelt in 2005 (yes, I’m old). However, I am very happy to have the chance to meet and work with you, and I look forward to your first writing piece. If you have any trouble reading my e-mail, I have also posted this on my wiki. Just click on my name and your initials and it will be posted under discussion. **


 *  Sending a rainbow, **
 *  Suzanna Leibold **

Dear Suzanna, My name is Brody, and as you already know, I'm attending Roosevelt High School. I am interested in anything high-tech, such as new programs, computer parts, etc. Because of this, I spend most of my time at home on the computer. While at school, however, I tend to fall asleep in many classes, mostly because of how boring they are (Pre-Calculus and US History). Oddly enough, AP Lang is my favorite class simply because Ms. Lange, my teacher, is super fun! Putting it bluntly, I need to improve on almost every aspect of my writing. It takes me forever to think of an introduction, and even then it's sub-par. Writing will be a huge part of my future, since being a systems administrator for a company such as Principal Financial will require extensive reports and I don't want to disappoint them by making them difficult to read. I do believe you will be a great help since I also have trouble backing up arguments, at least on paper, and none of my english classes have really taught exactly how to do it.

Sincerely, Brody T.


 * Rough Draft - Definition ( ****RHS** due 01.27.11; **171** due 01.28.11 **) **

Depression, anxiety, withdrawal, all of which can happen if someone does not continue to use what they are addicted to. Addiction is the enslavement of a person to certain stimuli, such as drugs, video games, or even work. [needs work] Drugs, more often the illegal variety, are the most addictive substances. Some give the users a sense of feeling good, and others present fantastical hallucinations. Whatever they may do, they tend to hook the user in order to achieve that same feeling. Many of these lead to inevitible death, as they wreak havoc on the body in order to create these feelings. Addiction to non-substance related stimuli, such as computers, video games, or work do not necessarily harm the body, but harm other aspects of the person’s life. One such instance is a 16 year old boy. He had become so addicted to the game "Halo 3", that when his parents took it away, he shot both of them in the head. He now faces 23 to life in prison.

- Did not get finished, I completely lost my trail of thought. My computer wouldn't connect to the internet after setting it up to have a remote connection.

Hey Brody, I know it's just after school for you, but I have some ideas for you. So far it looks like you know what needs work and that you have a couple of unfinished paragraphs, but it's a great start. Since a definition writing is telling us about a specific word, in this case "addiction," consider starting it off with that. I was confused as to what you were talking about at the beginning. Try rewording the first sentence so that you still have the clever use of depression, anxiety, and withdrawal. Or, if starting off with the word you're using doesn't work for you, how can you make "addiction" pop out to me? Don't worry about making sentences long for this assignment. Clear and concise is always great, especially when it comes to definitions. We're always taught that if the sentence is longer, it's better. Don't worry about that. Check out your second paragraph. How does that first sentence ("The most common...") sound to you? What do you think would make it flow a little better? How can you better clarify what you're saying? Also, "inevitable" is mispelled (that's just a tiny error. One I usually make, actually!) I'm excited to see what instance you have for me. I'm wondering how these non-substance addictions hurt aspects of a person's life and which aspects of life they hurt. I think that you have great ideas and just need time to hash it out. I love that you are going to use examples, and great use of the word "enslavement." That really pops out and pushes the point through to me as your reader. Another thing I do sometimes is, after writing an essay, I'll read it out loud to see how I like it. Let me know if there are any specific questions you have for me. If not, I can't wait to read the revision. You've already got me hooked on your essay. Let's see if it becomes an addiction. :)

Addiction, a problem whose symptoms include depression, anxiety, and withdrawal if not fed properly. Addiction is the enslavement of a person to certain stimuli, such as drugs, video games, or even work. Drugs, more often the illegal variety, are the most addictive substances. Some give users a sense of feeling good, and others present fantastical hallucinations. Whatever they do, they tend to hook the user in order to achieve that same feeling. Addictive drugs lead to inevitable death if untreated, as continuing to use them will wreak havoc on the body to create these feelings. Addiction to non-substance related stimuli, such as computers, video games, or work do not necessarily harm the body, but harm other aspects of the person’s life. One such instance is a 16-year-old boy. He had become so addicted to the game "Halo 3" that when his parents took it away, he shot both of them in the head. He now faces 23 to life in prison. My own addiction to the computer world has also made life tough for me. Since life today is so dependent on computers, it is hard to do anything without them. In my case however, the situation is reversed. When I am near a computer, I ignore my work and do things that satisfy my need to have fun. Addiction is not impossible to defeat. Rehabilitation clinics are specifically designed to free the slaves of addiction.
 * Revision - Definition ( ****RHS** due 01.31.11; **171** due 02.01.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

Wow Brody, this is great! You gave a very good definition essay here. You made it clear and gave a clear definition for the word "addiction" ( Addiction is the enslavement of a person to certain stimuli, such as drugs, video games, or even work.). You did a great job showing me how addiction "enslaves" a person and that it can take over different parts of a person's life. I really liked that you put your own experience in the essay because it tells me that you have a very clear understanding of the word addiction and what addiction does to you. I also really like your conclusion ( Addiction is not impossible to defeat. Rehabilitation clinics are specifically designed to free the slaves of addiction.). I think it packs a great punch, and you circle back to the idea of addiction "enslaving" people. That's brilliant. I'm going to be really picky now, but this is just to tweak what is a good essay right now. But there are some questions I want you think about when rereading your essay. How do you think you can make the conclusion a little less abrupt? Or do you think that short and sweet is the way to go? How can you jump from your addiction to the conclusion in a way that is fluid? Also, when you are talking about your addiction, what are you addicted to? Are you addicted to the computer or fun? Or both? What is the stimulus and what is the reward? There is one minor technical error. Put a comma after "In my case" and before "however" in the third sentence of the paragraph about your own addiction. That's it though!

I think you have great ideas Brody, and it was so much fun talking to you on Monday. Keep up the good work! This is a nice piece of work, and you can pick and choose to choose to change your essay if you want. If not, that's fine too. I look forward to getting to comment on your final draft! Have a great day!

Addiction, a problem whose symptoms include depression, anxiety, and withdrawal if not fed properly. Addiction is the enslavement of a person to certain stimuli, such as drugs, video games, or even work. Drugs, more often the illegal variety, are the most addictive substances. Some give users a sense of feeling good, and others present fantastical hallucinations. Whatever they do, they tend to hook the user in order to achieve that same feeling. Addictive drugs lead to inevitable death if untreated, as continuing to use them will wreak havoc on the body to recreate these feelings. Addiction to non-substance related stimuli, such as computers, video games, or work do not necessarily harm the body, but harm other aspects of the person’s life. One such instance is a 16-year-old boy. He had become so addicted to the game "Halo 3" that when his parents took it away, he shot both of them in the head. He now faces 23 to life in prison. My own addiction to the computer world has also made life tough for me. Since life today is so dependent on computers, it is hard to do anything without them. In my case, however, the situation is reversed. When I am near a computer, I ignore my work and do things that satisfy my need to have fun. Gaming and social activities control my life right now, and I am forcing myself to re-prioritize. Addiction is not impossible to defeat. Some have controlled it through sheer will, and others have turned to rehabilitation clinics. These clinics are specifically designed to free the slaves of addiction and regain control over their lives.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">FINAL - Definition ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 02.02.11; **171** due 02.04.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

Brody - I like what you have done with the last part of the essay. Thanks for taking the time to think about my comments. I think that you did very well getting to the heart of what "addiction" is and what it can encompass. You took a different spin on a term that is commonly used only for addiction to drugs, illegal or legal. You mentioned this definition, but you also opened up the definition to include the colloquial understandings of "addiction." I think it's great that you also bolstered these ideas through your own experiences. I say that you did a great job and fulfilled the prompt from what I know. I can't wait to see your next paper. Keep up the good work!


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">REFLECTION #1 ****<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 02.08.11; **171** due 02.11.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

Hi Brody, I'm just wondering how you felt our first interactions went and how you think the paper ultimately turned out. Do you have any parts of our conversations that you disliked, especially liked, or think needs addressed. Let me know.

Suzanna, You helped me through the parts I found most difficult, the intro and conclusion. I only hope I can write the next one nicely without much help, although it'd still be nice. I believe I have to write about addiction for the rest of these papers, it was the topic I picked at the beginning of the semester.

Many people are caught up in the vicious circle of addiction. **What exactly is the "vicious circle of addiction?"** Addiction is not as simple as one would believe. In fact, addiction has many different parts. The first part of addiction is fear. An addict's fear can include almost anything. Common examples are; loss of love, loss of worldly possessions, etc. Instead of it being a healthy fear, such as being afraid of failing a class **Is this a healthy fear? Are any fears healthy? If so, why?**, the addict's fear is irrational. Not taking the proper steps to conquer the fear leads to the next part: the search for relief. **What are the steps to conquer fears? Before telling me the wrong way to overcome a fear, what is the right way? Do you have any sources you could use to bolster your argument?** A normal, non-addicted person will take steps to enhance their life. Fearing failure is the drive to succeed. An addict will seek out a cure that makes absolutely no sense, such as drugs. The normal person would have already conquered their fear and moved on, while the addict has done nothing to help themselves. The supposed "cure" will only make things worse. In the example building up so far, this addict would have failed the class, fueling the fear, and driving them to turn back to the fake cure once again.
 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Rough Draft - Classification/Division ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 02.16.11; **171** due 02.18.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

-I do not know how to end this, and I also feel that I butchered the last 2 paragraph thingies.

Brody, I think that you have some very good ideas. I just think we need to hash them out a bit more. How do you think you could expand more on your ideas? I notice that you have a short introduction, and I know you wanted us to work on that. Think about how you can describe what you are telling me. It does not have to be elaborate. But think about why addiction is "not as simple as one would believe." Give me some examples or tell me why. In the third paragraph there is a small grammatical error: "...to enhance their life" should be his or her because you are only talking about one person not 2 or more. That's a really minor error. However, in the third paragraph, tell me more about why these fears cause addicts to seek out drugs? What leads them to this? Why are they so frenzied that they need drugs? Can normal people do the same things? And in the fourth paragraph, how does the normal person conquer his or her (same grammatical error) fears. This is a really good start Brody. Hang in there. You are working with really difficult ideas. For sure you are making me think and think hard! I know that with your help, I will be a scholar of addiction by the end of this semester! I'll see you in class today!


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Revision - Classification/Division ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 02.23.11; **171** due 02.25.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

Sorry my stuff is all late, my uncle died on Thursday and I've been busy with visitation thingies and preparing for the funeral, I won't be finished until Tuesday.

Thank you for telling me Brody. I'm so sorry for your loss. Take the time needed to be with your family.

Many people are caught up in the vicious circle of addiction. Addiction is not as simple as one would believe. The circle of addiction includes: fear, a search for relief, a new habit, and either release or reinforce.(**reinforcement)** The first part of addiction is fear. An addict's fear can include almost anything. Common examples are; loss of love, loss of worldly possessions, etc. Instead of it being a healthy fear, such as being afraid of failing a class, the addict's fear is irrational.**(What is a healthy fear? Why is failing a class a healthy fear? What makes an addicts fear so irrational?)**, Not taking the proper steps to conquer the fear leads to the next part: the search for relief. A normal, non-addicted person will try to enhance their life. Fearing failure is the drive to succeed**.(Could this be a healthy fear?)**. An addict will seek an easy way out, such as drugs.**(Why are drugs the easy way out? Doesn’t that just make everything else harder?)** The normal person will look for help,**(What is a normal person? Can abnormal people not also look for help? Some people will look for help and some people will not. Does it matter who looks for help?)** push themselves already conquered their fear and moved on, while the addict has done nothing to help themselves. The supposed "cure" **(What cure?)** will only make things worse. In the example building up so far, this addict would have failed the class, fueling the fear, and driving them to turn back to the fake cure once again. (still working on it)


 * Ok, keep working on it Brody. You are on the right track. Remember that content is important. You are giving me the steps of addiction. Tell me about these steps. What happens during the fear process? I have examples, but I do not know exactly what is going on during this time.**


 * The paragraphs are a little scattered and have trouble connecting. How can you transition from one paragraph to the next? You have already told me the steps in the first paragraph (fear, a search for relief, a new habit, and release/reinforcement). Try using these to structure your paper.**


 * As for grammar, look at the first paragraph. I put reinforcement, because that is what an addict would get if they fail. Is there another word that might be easier to understand in this context? Maybe not, that’s up to you. In the second paragraph, you give common examples. You don’t need an “etc.” You’ve already told me that you are not naming all examples in the world. Look at the 4th paragraph, first sentence. Make sure that everything is in the same tense and that you have all of your commas.**


 * Brody, you’ve made progress, so keep going. Remember what you are focusing your paper on specifically and work to use that to pull you back into what you are writing. Remember that you need to tell me about addiction and its steps. Act like I know nothing about addiction or the process. Teach me. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing your next draft.**


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">FINAL - Classification/Division ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 03.01.11; **171** due 03.04.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">REFLECTION #2 ****<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 03.22.11; **171** due 03.25.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Rough Draft - Argument ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 03.30.11; **171** due 04.01.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

In the war of computers, there are two big names: Macintosh (Mac) and Windows. These two operating systems have been competing since the 1980's to become the sovereign leader of the computer world. Windows, however, is the clear victor in almost every aspect of computing, with over 90% of all systems running it.

With most of the worlds computers running a version of Windows, it seems to be the better operating system. This seems to be true, considering that it has an innumerable amount of programs, tens of thousands of games, and is easy to use (with a standard user, not an administrator).**(Nice remark! But it makes me wonder, how is it easy for standard users? Is it easy for administrators? If not, why? Can windows be accessible to both administrators and standard users? Is this their computer of choice? Why?)** Windows also boasted the ability to customize a computer, whether it be through hardware (video cards, different CPUs, etc.) or software (programs). Windows, as great as it is, has some flaws. The biggest problem plaguing **(Good word choice!)** users are malicious programs, also known as viruses, spyware, malware, crapware **(I don’t like crapware. It's just so crappy.)**, which infect and effect the computing experience. Also, compared to other operating systems, Windows requires far more system resources. Even then, it is still a good operating system to begin learning.**(Begin learning what? Should new computer users use this system? Why would it be easier to use? What makes Windows easy?)**

Macintosh is advertised as the "better operating system" through the Mac vs. PC ads, and this might have been true, if it didn't have so much holding it back. Despite not having the amount of programs and games and other applications that Windows supports, Mac still treads water with its superior ability for graphic and media design, a simplified user interface, and very few malicious programs. For these reasons, it is popular in many schools where students must have a computer. One of Mac's major downfalls is the lack of customization in the hardware department. Even though it's possible to install the Mac OS on a non-Apple computer, it's both hard to do and against the License agreement established by Apple. Mac would be more popular if it had more support, but alas, it does not, and that's why it is held back. **(Tell me more! What support is it missing? Explain to me how this lack of support holds it back. In what way is Mac held back?)**

Not personally ever owning a Mac might effect my opinions a bit, but I personally prefer Windows. My main reason for preferring Windows is both customization and games. **(What is customization? Why does this impact your interest in Windows? Why is customization better? How can it better a computer user’s experience?)** Though Mac is starting to, it just isn't progressing fast enough to encompass my type of games, while Windows continues to get more and more games each year. Windows is also far cheaper. To get a Mac with decent hardware, it's upwards of $2000, however, to get a Windows PC with outstanding hardware, it's around $1200. And since money is extremely tight in my family, we're somewhat forced to take Windows anyway.**(So is this a good thing or a bad thing? You’re forced to have windows, but luckily it has all of the games and software necessary for every day life, right?)**

Windows is cheap, reliable (somewhat), and easy to use, so it stands out in the computer community. However, the operating system **(Put a comma here and after person)** which is better for any specific person is highly dependent on what they want to do with their computer. Windows is better in entertainment and number crunching, while Mac is better in graphical design and media applications, as well as equal to Windows in word processing.

**Brody – Great job on this paper. I’ve posed some questions that I’d like you to consider when redrafting your paper. Remember that your paper is arguing a point: Windows computers are better than Mac computers. Don’t be afraid to drive this point home and really explain how Windows are better computers. Act like you are helping me in a store and I know nothing about computers. You are trying to sell me a Windows computer. Explain to me why I should buy Windows. Tell me every detail, and skim over the shortcomings. (That’s the best part of argument papers!)**

**For Grammar/Mechanics you have very little, as always. (And you say you can’t write. Oy!) In the second paragraph, first sentence you are talking about the “world’s” computers. Make sure you have the apostrophe that signifies that the computers belong to the world. Also, the third to last sentence in paragraph 2 talks about how malicious programs “infect and effect.” You want “affect” for that term. I myself just learned that effect is a noun that is like a visual effect in movies. Affect means to change or something occurs and there is something that affects you. Hopefully that makes sense. Same thing in the first sentence of paragraph 4 (affect). Also in paragraph 4, go ahead and start a new sentence after $2000. Those are two different ideas. Go ahead and lose the “somewhat” in the last paragraph. Remember that you are arguing FOR Windows. It’s okay to really push for windows without dwelling on the not-so-great aspects of the product. Some of the greatest arguers tend to leave that out until someone asks them about it.**

**I like that you are willing to give Macs an equal-opportunity to be in league with Windows, but you are arguing that Windows is better. So reiterate why Windows is so good and how that trumps the Mac computers. Your argument is that Windows are superior to Macs. Focus on that, and tell me every detail about why Windows are the better brand to buy. I love your introduction. Great hook!**

**Brody, I am so impressed with your paper. You have done a great job writing it and you have written so much! I love that. Never be afraid to write more. No teacher, especially in English, will be upset with you if you write a 20-page paper. If the teacher is upset, you have a dumb teacher. I have seen an immense amount of progress through my time with you, and have to say that it has been an honor and delight to work with you. Thank you for a great experience. I’m only sorry that you will never be in one of my classes. I would love to have a class full of intelligent students like you. Keep up the great work!**


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Revision (1) - Argument ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 04.05.11; **171** due 04.08.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **

In the war of computers, there are two big names: Macintosh (Mac) and Windows. These two operating systems have been competing since the 1980's to become the sovereign leader of the computer world. Windows, however, is the clear victor in almost every aspect of computing, with over 90% of all systems running it.

With most of the worlds computers running a version of Windows, it seems to be the better operating system. This may be true, considering that it has an innumerable amount of programs, tens of thousands of games, and is easy to use, at least with a standard user. Windows also boasted the ability to customize a computer, whether it be through hardware (video cards, different CPUs, etc.) or software (programs). Windows, as great as it is, has some flaws. The biggest problem plaguing users are malicious programs, also known as viruses, spyware, malware, crapware, which infect and affect the computing experience. Also, compared to other operating systems, Windows requires far more system resources. Even then, it is still a good operating system to begin learning basic computing needs such as word processing, getting on the internet, and managing pictures.

Macintosh is advertised as the "better operating system" through the Mac vs. PC ads, and this might have been true, if it didn't have so much holding it back. Despite not having the amount of programs and games and other applications that Windows supports, Mac still treads water with its superior ability for graphic and media design, a simplified user interface, and very few malicious programs. For these reasons, it is popular in many schools where students must have a computer. One of Mac's major downfalls is the lack of customization in the hardware department. Even though it's possible to install the Mac OS on a non-Apple computer, it's both hard to do and against the License agreement established by Apple. Mac would be more popular if it had more support by the gaming and programming community, as a lot of users play video games.

Not personally ever owning a Mac might effect my opinions a bit, but I personally prefer Windows. Being able to completely personalize the look and feel of what my OS looks like, as well as the endless games and applications are my main reasons for liking Windows. Though Mac is starting to, it just isn't progressing fast enough to encompass my type of games, while Windows continues to get more and more games each year. Windows is also far cheaper. To get a Mac with decent hardware, it's upwards of $2000, however, to get a Windows PC with outstanding hardware, it's around $1200. And since money is extremely tight in my family, we're somewhat forced to take Windows anyway. I've decided that being stuck with Windows is alright, as it contains everything I need for daily life.

Windows is cheap, reliable, and easy to use, so it stands out in the computer community. However, the operating system, which is better for any specific person, is highly dependent on what they want to do with their computer. Windows is better in entertainment and number crunching, while Mac is better in graphical design and media applications, as well as equal to Windows in word processing.


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Revision (2) - Argument ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 04.13.11; **171** due 04.15.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">FINAL - Argument ( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 04.19.11; **171** due 04.22.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">REFLECTION #3 ****<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">( **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">**RHS** due 04.25.11 **<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">) **